Boring Story Made Interesting

Written by Tommy
Edited by ME

I am Tommy. I was on winter break. During winter break it was cold. During winter break it snowed. During winter break I watched movies. I ate bagels and watched movies at the same time. During winter break I play basketball outside. It was cold. My hands hurt. My hands hurt so I could not play well. I did not play well and it made me mad. I am mad when I am mad. I instant messaged Yesol and Sanghyun. I slept late every day. I woke late every day. It snowed during winter break. Daegu had little snow. I ate candy over break. I ate chicken over break. I took many showers. Shower made me clean. I like being clean. I don’t like being dirty. I brushed my teeth. I don’t want cavities. I did pushups over break. I did sit ups over break. I stayed in shape. Mr. Eric told me to stay in shape. I went to the bathroom many times over break. I went to the to use the bathroom. In the bathroom there is a thing. I urinated my urine in the thing. I flushed my urine. I washed my hands. I like being clean. I don’t like being dirty.

EDITED:

I am Tommy. It was freezing cold during winter break. It was so cold, it snowed outside. But Daegu didn't get that much snow. During the break, I watched movies while I ate bagels. I also played basketball outside, but it was so cold that my hands hurt. They hurt so bad that I played horribly. It made me frustrated because I couldn't play well, and when I'm mad, I get really mad. Anyway, I instant messaged Yesol and Sanghyun a lot. I also slept late every night, ending up waking late every morning. I ate tons of candy and chicken. Over the course of the three-week break, I took many showers. Showers make you clean, and I like being clean. I hate being dirty. I also brush my teeth because I hate being dirty. Also, if your teeth are dirty, you get cavities. And I don’t want cavities. Mr. Eric told me to stay in shape, so I did push-ups and sit ups over break. That's how I stayed in shape. Like washing, another necessity is going to the bathroom. Therefore, I went to the bathroom many times over break. When I go to use the bathroom, there is a thing. I urinate in the thing, and then I flush. Then I wash my hands. Like I said, I like being clean. I hate being dirty.